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Monday 28 May 2018

The Lost Bottle Comic/Narrative

Narrator"In a town a small town  at that,anyway there are 4 kids who always went to this popular beach called sunny side ups''

Chad"Just keep digging just keep digging''
Ryan''Dude stop singing that and why are we here again''
Dave''To find the buried of the treasure''
Ryan''Ya I must have forgotten BECAUSE WE HAVE BEEN SEARCHING FOR A WHOLE DAY''
Chad''Heh but we if we keep digging we can find treasure''
Alex''Sup''
Chad,Dave and Ryan''WHEN DID YOU GET HERE''
Alex''I don't know and you should not care''
Chad and Dave''Ok''
Alex''Anyway what are you guys doing at the beach anyway''
Ryan''Looking for treasure''
Alex''Always looking for treasure''
Chad''Ye but we will find treasure I can feel it my dude I can feel it''
Narrator''A bottle comes from the see for no reason''
Chad''Look at that a bottle that could probably lead us to treasure''
Alex''Sure''
Chad'WHEN DID YOU GET BEHIND ME''
Alex''Ninja'' 
Ryan''IOH A NOTE IS IN HERE''
Alex''Word''
Ryan''It says for what you seek you will have to climb to the highest peek''
Dave''NOOOOOOO A RIDDLE DARN YOU BOTTLE''

Scene Manager''At the house''
Ryan''What this even mean?''
Dave''I do not know''
Kim''Sup''
Ryan''WHEN DID YOU GET HERE''
Kim''None of yo biz''
Chad''Kim could help us with this aren't you good at riddles right Kim?''
Kim''You know it''
Alex''Then help us with this riddle''
Chad''OK STOP WITH THE NINJA STUFF''
Alex''No''
Chad''Any way like Alex said can you help us out with the riddle?''
Kim''I will be glad''
Time lord''4 minutes later''
Kim''Well we need to go to the tallest building in this town''
Alex''Ok lets go'


Distance Lord''1 in a half mile away from the building''
Chad''My legs hurt''
Dave''Stop complaining''
Ryan''We are almost there my dude''
Alex phone''Ring Ring''
Ryan''It's Alex,Sup Alex and where are you?''
Alex''At the building With Kim''
Ryan''WHAT''
Chad and Dave''What is it ?''
Ryan''ALEX AND KIM ARE ALREADY AT THE BUILDING''
Chad''Wow''
Ryan''THAT'S IT 4TH WALL LORDS TELEPORT US TO THE TALLEST BUILDING IN TOWN''
4th wall lords ''Ok'
Chad and Dave''What just happen''
Ryan''Don't ask''
Chad''Ok..''
Kim''Finally you're here
Ryan''Ya we are NOW LETS GO TO THE TOP OF THE BUILDING'

Scene manager''At the top of the roof"
Ryan''Ok we are finally the roof''
Chad''Ya but we need to find the treasure''

The Guy  Who Does Not Want To Finish The Story Lord''They found the  treasure then they went  back to their  houses and  that is the end of the story cya''   






2 comments:

  1. Wow, Frank the narrative might just be a script for actors!

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  2. Wow Frank you should ad pictures.

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